Monday, November 18, 2019

I Told Him Not To




I Told Him Not To


I told him not to

Take the dog for a walk

I knew with the crack of her leash

He would go down.

He went anyway

And with the cracking of her leash

Down he went

Fracturing his hip.


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12 comments:

  1. tonispencerNovember 18, 2019 at 7:02 PM

    Don't you hate it when you told him so?

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  2. Gillena CoxNovember 18, 2019 at 7:05 PM

    OMG how unfortunate for him
    Nice dramatic quadrille. Happy Monday

    Much✏love


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  3. De JacksonNovember 18, 2019 at 7:12 PM

    Oh, NO! Yikes!

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  4. Both of us can't look good ... its either me or the houseNovember 18, 2019 at 9:07 PM

    Ouch, I felt that.

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  5. Frank HubenyNovember 18, 2019 at 11:26 PM

    Sorry to hear about the accident. I hope he recovers.

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  6. Mary HoodNovember 19, 2019 at 8:13 AM

    Oh, I fear the going down in the winter and cracking a hip. Sorry if this is more than just a poem.

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  7. indybevNovember 19, 2019 at 12:07 PM

    So sorry. I hope you resisted the urge to say "I told you so" !

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  8. Jade LiNovember 19, 2019 at 10:27 PM

    Can't say you didn't try to keep it from happening.

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  9. brudbergNovember 20, 2019 at 3:58 PM

    Oh no... but telling him "I told you... " won't help the least.

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  10. MishNovember 20, 2019 at 8:17 PM

    I like the repetition of "cracking of her leash". There is an "I told you so" in the tone.

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